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Cool song, cool sheet. Here's some things to consider:

• It's annoying when you have just 1 extra system on a new page, isn't it? From my experience, I can't stand it lol. For this piece, I would sacrifice the even 2-measure distribution in some of the less-dense areas. Maybe combine m5-7 and m28-30 into two 3 measure systems, with everything else still being 2 measure systems. I don't think this creates too much clutter, and it's definitely better than having an almost-blank page.
• m6 and similar spots (RH): The tie on beat 3 should be flipped up.
• m16, 18, 20, 22 RH: In beat 1, since both layers share the same rhythm, you could move the 16th rest up more, and then move the lower layer beam up so there's some more space between it and the LH part.

That's all I got, nice work!

Ok we change something (we also add some courtesy accidentals).
Regarding the layer we think there is no valid reason to change the current layout.
Can anyone help us with any opinion?