Well, the rhythm seemed off at the start, and now I think I know who you might fix it. Just so you know, you don't have to trust me on this, since 1) I don't post on these forums too much, and 2) I haven't arranged any songs. I messed around a bit with the rhythm on the first part and I got it to sound like what I think the theme sounds like. Here's what I did:
If you change the quarter notes at the start of the song to eighth notes, and tie them to the next note, of course inserting a eighth rest before the eighth note. That sounded right to me, but you don't have to do anything! Just my opinion. Thanks for listening to me earlier. And how did you get the screen shots?
If you change the quarter notes at the start of the song to eighth notes, and tie them to the next note, of course inserting a eighth rest before the eighth note. That sounded right to me, but you don't have to do anything! Just my opinion. Thanks for listening to me earlier. And how did you get the screen shots?