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Show posts MenuQuote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 12:18:32 PM- Bass of m. 5 beat 2.5 should be E. Conversely, beat 3 of m. 6 should be B
- I think it might be worth it to fill out the E and E7 chords out a bit more in m. 5-6
- The melody (er, countermelody really) in measure 10 goes D#-E in beats 1.5-2 instead of C#-D# (the grace note will need adjusting too)
- The first bass note of m. 20 sounds like an F#
- Nudge the dynamics a bit further from the barline/notes stems in m. 21 and 25
- There's a B on beat 1.5 in the right hand of the last measure, not sure if you left that out intentionally? I think it should be present
Quote from: Latios212 on August 07, 2019, 07:34:37 PMJust realized I made a typo there, so I fixed it. Also it seems to bend upwards to G# from F#, so it's fine if you want to keep the G#.
Also - the last system only has 2 measures - so you can easily bump one of the 4-measure systems down to 3 to balance it out better.
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