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I am gone from now until the 14th

you should have a key signature for your pieces (here, im referring to bowser's castle). It is in Ab Major, from my assumptions, with change ups every which way when you get towards the end (including Gmi,Bb Maj, C Maj, Asus4, etc).
Also, adding an 8vb on bars 6&7 should also be easier (just move the two bars an octave up and add an 8vb... thats part of the NSM submission rules)... found here
Also, I forgot to say, you should introduce yourself on the introduction forums, everyone would love to meet ya!

Thanks, I'll add the key signature.

I can't add the 8vb myself, because finale notepad doesn't have it. Can someone else do that for me?

And I already have Introduced myself 

The whole notes in the right hand make it sound a bit boring (the original version is "orchestrated"). Due to the fact that this piece is very slow, you could try to add some notes there.

I'll try adding some notes in there, Thanks.

In measure 28 in the bass, there's only 3 beats compensated for. Same for the last measure.
Filling in the measure with rests makes it look better as well as playable.
Also, I'm pretty sure it changes keys somewhere in here. If not, rewrite Fb and Cb as E naturals and B naturals, as they stay that way through the measure.
Good going though. Sounds right. You arrange fast! =D

I'll fix the measures and keys.

Thanks. I'll fix the link and up the tempo.

Also, I'm starting [WII] Mario Kart Wii Bowser's castle

[Submissions]

Submissions
These are Direct Links. I don't use MediaFire.
Feel free to criticize me, This is my first arrangment.

For arranging: Try to arrange a song by ear, and see how easy it is. If you're like me, you'll get to measure ten and have no idea where to go next. I use midis; I download a midi from vgmusic.com and open the midi in Finale. I open a blacnk Finale page and move the notes, measure by measure, into the black document. In almos tno itme at all, I have a perfectly good piano arrangement.  

I'm like him.

[Wii] Mario Kart Wii
     Maple Treeway
          MID
          MUS
     Bowser's Castle
          MID
          MUS
     Racing Menu
          MID
          MUS

[NDS] Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time
     Vim Factory
          MID
          MUS
     Boss Battle
          MID
          MUS

I will take Mario Kart Wii Maple Treeway.

EDIT: I have now finished Maple Treeway.

Thanks! I might even be able to arrange stuff. Maybe. But I've never done it before.

Guess what? I am now in your sphere of existence! Anyway, I like video game music and can play piano decently. I don't have the full finale, just notepad. for now. And I've been following NSM for a long time. So.