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Yes! I am absolutely going to continue this one. I started working on main the riff (I haven't updated the sheet yet). I heard the bass line consistently playing 16th notes, but I couldn't get it to sound good. Here's what I got so far
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/723691274544218173/841072288048742400/unknown.png

Also if you want to me respond more quickly, please message/ping me on the discord server. I would respond much more quickly there than on the forum.

https://youtu.be/kexqSlkVTf0

things I don't know how to do on notepad/can't do
- formatting is bad
- I'm not entirely sure how coda's work, but just have it repeat to the beginning at the end
- m8 beat 2 on right hand needs E nautural > D grace notes
- m14 beat 3 right hand needs Bb grace note
- m17-20 left hand needs to be an octave up

Hey all sorry for not really doing anything with this one. I lost all real interest in it pretty quickly after finishing it and just never felt like going back to fix it, so yeah this one is dead

oh yeah! this thing exists! So I didn't really respond to this because I really do not understand the things to fix I got from Radiak. They make no sense to me. They say things that I simply do not see whatsoever. I'm not sure if they got the key signature wrong or something but these notes do not make sense. for example:

"There's an A playing under the high B in m22 RH"
What high B?

Maybe I'm just painfully incorrect but I just cannot understand the notes given here.

congrats BlueKirby, AcceptedSugar, and Kaphita!
Oh yeah, me too
Can't wait to hopefully be in this community for a long time coming and produce even more sheets!

Awesome! thanks, I'll fix it up tomorrow because I'm winding down and don't feel like doing it right now, although, what is a performance direction? is it just text saying "play it on the left hand"?

Yeah that sounds right to me

https://youtu.be/XDfRB4LcjNA

Stuff I didn't include/Stuff I'm not sure about/Stuff I can't fix in notepad/Stuff I don't know how to do:
- Maybe the continuous 8th note line should be in the left hand
- 32nd notes in measures 21 and 29 might be grace notes
- There's an extra voice I left out in measure 25
- I have no clue what happened at measures 33-36
- 8th notes block up the word "Home" in measure 38
- I don't know how to do the decrescendo effectively in measures 40 and 48
- Ritardando needs to be slower in measure 49 (or maybe it needs to start earlier
- not really sure what to do with the copyright at the bottom so I just ignored it.

Maelstrom I'm not quite sure what you mean by your second point, got the first point done (also just to let you know I originally had m. 12 being the half step below, but Latios changed it so it could be "consistent with the rest of the piece.") I will update the mus, pdf, and midi once I learn what you meant on your second point.

Got it fixed LeviR.star

Also sorry for the kinda late reply.

Alright I was able to fix most of it up:
- Toru Minegishi did work on this track with other composers, but to add that onto the sheet would make a very long list so I didn't add it, but that could definitely be fixed quickly if you want that there.
- Melody is now an octave lower
- half note added
- I just realized that the light drum percussion thing was actually pitched, so yeah I added the beat 4 notes as well (they are also stacatto)
- m12 is still playing A in the left hand now
- I can't seem to edit the D.S. thing in Notepad
- Yeah i have no idea how to format in finale notepad

Edit 2 done.

you clearly used piano because sinnoh used piano and sinnoh has the superior music 

(1st) edit notes:
Whole sheet fits on one page.
Former bars 3-10 changed to be bars 3-6 with a repeat.
Added perfect 5th intervals on all left hand quarter notes (except on measure 2).
Changed the rhythm writing from dotted 8th note -> dotted 8th note to dotted 8th note -> 16th note tied to an 8th note where those used to be.
The 32nd note mordents have been removed in measures 15-22 and have been replaced by 8th note mordents.

Thanks for the notes Zelia, i do like the formatting and edits you did that you did, very helpful. Here are some of my responses to your notes:
I think as a piano arrangement the beat 2 8th notes in bar 1 work better if they aren't staccato, but if were going for accuracy here that could be changed
I was able to identify the bass notes from m3-14 that have 5ths in them but i couldn'tftp:// identify the other interval
To my best knowledge you can't use grace notes in finale notepad so that's why it was left out
m15-23 are more or less m1-2 in a major key, the odd measures of 15-23 are practically the same as measure one but in a major key, so likewise i think that it would work better for the piano arrangement to not have staccatos there, as for the staccatos in 16/18/22 i do like those and added them thank you for pointing those out
yeah the 32nd note was unnecessary
m22 was me just being lazy really, i didn't look close enough and just copy/pasted m18 without really checking
For dynamics and octaves i think It'll be staying the same

thank you again for the feedback! really helpful, the only thing i couldn't do was add the grace notes and i couldn't identify some of the bass intervals that you mentioned.

https://youtu.be/FMsbXliPRPc