I checked out what you have. It seems pretty good. I'm not very good at terminology on how to improve it, however, I found someone else rendition in a PDF that might help. http://www.gamemusicthemes.com/sheetmusic/nintendo64/kirby64thecrystalshards/finalbosso2/Kirby_64_-_The_Crystal_Shards_-_Final_Boss_O2_by_ALF.pdf
Let me know if there's any update on it! Thank you so much
Let me know if there's any update on it! Thank you so much
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