Submission Information:
Series: Pikmin
Game: Pikmin 2
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Frontier Cavern
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83)
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(Technically that part that adds in for the working/treasure variations is also being randomly mixed up, but for the sake of the arrangement I standardized it)
Bump.
Notes look good. Nice arrangement. The only thing I really have for this one is that some of the rolls look like they're colliding with the notes. Most notably, M. 65 & 72 (and others like it).
According to this, they're technically not colliding
zoomed way in
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/aksjhamxcwkplsa/Screenshot%202018-05-23%2018.10.39.png?dl=1)
But they look like it at 100%.
normal zoom
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/ffck5ayyn377yjg/Screenshot%202018-05-23%2018.14.22.png?dl=1)
I'll leave it up to you whether you would like to edit that or not.
I approve of this arrangement.
Meh I'm not sure if that's is worth my time. Thanks for checking it!
If nowhere else, I do strongly recommend it in m. 33, 40, and 65-72. There's enough room in those measures to nudge everything to the right slightly, which I think would make it look much nicer. Similarly I know this sheet is super tight on space but if you could give the "Working" and "Treasure" variations just a tad more space above them, that would be great. You could free up some space for that by reducing the gap between LH/RH staves - it's unnecessarily wide for the first few variations.
But yeah, aside from that, looks terrific!
Yeah, I agree with Lat.
Eeeeeeeeh fine I'll look at it later and consider it.
The files have been updated.
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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