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NinSheetMusic => Submission Center => Submission Archive => Topic started by: Zeta on August 05, 2015, 12:08:39 PM

Title: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2015, 12:08:39 PM
Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Colosseum
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Cipher Syndicate
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Pianist Da Sootopolis (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4243)

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Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate Theme" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 05, 2015, 12:14:15 PM
Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate Theme" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Bespinben on August 10, 2015, 06:38:11 PM
While you always excel in the your expression markings and musical performance directions, the arrangement itself needs work.

Here's how m. 1-4 should play out:

(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Fcipher1_zpszm8w2bb3.jpg&hash=9bcfab50f5f0f133e4a3c99e270de2a24fac30a2) (http://s1111.photobucket.com/user/Bespinben/media/cipher1_zpszm8w2bb3.jpg.html)

1.) The organ has harmony in 5ths, which was not present.
2.) The rhythm of the timpani is syncopated -- the second strike is on beat 2.5, not beat 3.
3.) The upright string bass was missing in m. 1, and in m. 2 it was incorrectly transcribed.

Here's how m. 5-6 should play out:

(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Fcipher2_zpsadytigsf.jpg&hash=1d24c1acdafadc8140b81303ea586eb13fdf0826) (http://s1111.photobucket.com/user/Bespinben/media/cipher2_zpsadytigsf.jpg.html)

It's not unison. There are individual harmonies on nearly all the chord strikes.

Here's the file I created to make these screenshots. I expect great things of m. 7+, which are similarly afflicted:
[MUSX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/PKMN%20Colosseum%20-%20Cipher%20Syndicate%27s%20Theme.musx)

Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate Theme" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 10, 2015, 08:08:56 PM
Many thanks!! Taking care of these tonight.
Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate Theme" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 11, 2015, 01:36:14 PM
Quick question- with the guitar riff at m. 7, should the bottom voice still be an eighth note and the top voice be a quarter, or just make the entire thing an eighth? Or just keep it as is?
 
Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: DonValentino on August 21, 2015, 10:46:45 AM
So, from Bespin's work I finished the rest but not gonna accept because I can't do the musx (please someone!).
Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Latios212 on August 21, 2015, 10:51:59 AM
All clear!
Title: Re: [GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate" by Pianist Da Sootopolis
Post by: Zeta on August 21, 2015, 10:52:26 AM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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