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Title: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 24, 2011, 10:15:13 PM
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Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on January 01, 2012, 07:09:53 PM
...Well? I think its too short. On the other side, I don't want to repeat it again because that would be boring...Ideas?
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: pumpy_heart on January 01, 2012, 07:35:58 PM
Wow, nice job. Sounds pretty cool.
I really liked the development around measure 73. However, the ending doesn't seem to be as drawn out as the development, merely just a repeat of the main idea. It works, but if you want to expand, I'd suggest adding more solo options before that development starts. It sounds kinda jazzy to begin with so this addition would fit the style.
I thought it was a pretty good length, but if you want a 10 minute piece or so, you could give everyone a solo or optional solo over a constant bass trombone line.
The ending could be more drawn out, maybe repeat the main idea with more improvisational options or expand the range, as it also fits the style.
Hope I helped. Though really, I don't think the piece needs help at all haha.
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on January 02, 2012, 10:36:03 AM
Thanks for the feedback! After litstening to it a few more times I think the length is not an issue. However, I would kinda like to expand that part at 73 (like you suggested)-I'll play with it and see where it takes me. Thanks again!
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs Lots of new stuff!
Post by: Olimar12345 on July 18, 2012, 11:37:50 AM
Whats this? New stuff?? Well I'll be...
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs Lots of new stuff!
Post by: FSM-Reapr on July 18, 2012, 11:49:07 AM
You'll be.. what?
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs Lots of new stuff!
Post by: Olimar12345 on July 18, 2012, 11:55:43 AM
...thats the end of the statement... stop spamming. -_-'
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs Lots of new stuff!
Post by: FSM-Reapr on July 18, 2012, 11:58:43 AM
Ok...
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: spitllama on August 07, 2012, 10:24:50 PM
Lolol language barrier ftw. "Well I'll be" is a phrase which means the speaker is surprised-- typically from an unexpected occurence. I suppose a simple equivalent would be "wow."
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Jompa on August 08, 2012, 12:57:19 AM
I really liked "the Black Horse Troop" !
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 08, 2012, 12:03:58 PM
Tahnks! Glad you like it.
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 07, 2013, 07:36:50 PM
Bump oh hey look a recording
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: FireArrow on December 07, 2013, 08:07:09 PM
Hahaha, I am now your only follower.
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 07, 2013, 08:15:12 PM
Alright! WOOO‼ lol I don't really advertise that thing anyway xD
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: FireArrow on December 07, 2013, 08:49:17 PM
Is everything you posted a composition?
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 08, 2013, 08:21:36 AM
Not everything. Only the recordings that say I wrote them are mine. The other three big band tunes there are written by Rich DeRosa, Bill Cunliffe, and Neil Slater.
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: FireArrow on December 08, 2013, 01:34:08 PM
Ah, OK, I still love all of it nonetheless.
Title: Re: Olimar's stuffs
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 08, 2013, 05:21:17 PM
Lol, well I only use soundcloud because its player can be embedded in Wordpress flawlessly. It's not a place I visit regularly :P