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Title: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: The-Real-Link on March 15, 2008, 07:53:10 AM
Some of you may remember a piano composition that I had done a while ago called, Village in a Field of Flowers. Well this is an arrangement I did of it with multiple instruments. I want to know if you think it needs some bass instrument like a cello, to balance the notes.

http://www.mediafire.com/?mjed2rmil43
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: Sirus on March 15, 2008, 07:33:01 PM
A bass instrument would be nice
I suggest cello because it has the best sound out of all the bass instruments (partly b/c i play cello, but you didnt need to know that  :P)
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: blah54 on March 17, 2008, 01:47:38 PM
i don't think you need a bass instrument... i think that that would wreck the feel of the song, which is lighthearted... adding a bass would make the sound more "full", but it would likely not have such a cute, lighthearted feel...
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: zora_dude on April 11, 2008, 05:59:19 PM
i like it! its pretty good you certaintly set the right mood! might i suggest a little more decresendo then cresendos?
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: HugoMeister on April 11, 2008, 08:04:44 PM
Quote from: blah54 on March 17, 2008, 01:47:38 PMi don't think you need a bass instrument... i think that that would wreck the feel of the song, which is lighthearted... adding a bass would make the sound more "full", but it would likely not have such a cute, lighthearted feel...

Use a viola then. It is a lower instrument. It goes an octave below middle C. It will still give it that "cute" feel, and give the song a good bass sound.
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: master_gamer38 on April 12, 2008, 10:13:19 PM
You're just saying that because you play viola. But yeah, violas are amazing no matter what.
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: HugoMeister on April 13, 2008, 12:13:31 PM
Hey, when you know how to help people, you should help them.  ::)
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: zora_dude on April 13, 2008, 02:32:21 PM
i thin kthe upper range of the viola will be good because aren't you trying to keep the same mood not change it?
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: The-Real-Link on April 23, 2008, 01:16:55 PM
I might use a viola. I was actually thinking about composing a second theme and having a bass string (Possibly cello) in it, and have the Piano drop an octave. (I might switch the key to D major as well) That way it would feel a little fuller, and be more than a minute long!
Title: Re: Village of Flower - Critique needed!
Post by: random_goldfish on April 26, 2008, 11:04:13 AM
Perhaps on the second run of the theme you can use some bass (cello...pick one) to fill it out and keep it moving...just to keep it interesting to the ear. (It is very lovely though) The cello has a nice bass and a tenor range so it won't be too heavy like the contrabass. Even A Bass Clarinet would do and might even fit the instrumentation more. I like the song though very much. ^_^

~Megan
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