Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: The Legend of the Mystical Ninja
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Rendezvous With That Girl (Picture Matching)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Code_Name_Geek (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5670)
Title source (https://vgmdb.net/album/65327)
This looks really good.
LH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m2 b4.5 I'm hearing as Bn not C#
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)
LH m3 b4.0 I'm hearing as F# (above current D#)
In measure 11 when the second melody goes to the LH, I think it would be better put in a second voice with opposing stems so it is clearer melody went.
Quote from: goldenscruff on July 05, 2024, 02:17:34 AMLH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)
I disagree with these points, think its good as is but otherwise in agreeance with Goldenscruff!
• m1 and m3 beat RH 2.5 the D# should be a C#
• m12 LH beats 3 and 4 you could add an octave above to these notes
Quote from: goldenscruff on July 05, 2024, 02:17:34 AMThis looks really good.
LH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m2 b4.5 I'm hearing as Bn not C#
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)
LH m3 b4.0 I'm hearing as F# (above current D#)
In measure 11 when the second melody goes to the LH, I think it would be better put in a second voice with opposing stems so it is clearer melody went.
Done, according to Kricketune54's adjustments.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 11, 2024, 07:50:16 PM• m1 and m3 beat RH 2.5 the D# should be a C#
• m12 LH beats 3 and 4 you could add an octave above to these notes
Did both of these as well.
Thanks to both of you for the feedback!
• Maybe add a dashed line from m11 LH 1st voice beat 4 to m12 RH 2nd voice beat 1 (G#)? Just to show the progression.
Since that's a minor point though, I will give this my approval
Also on the box art in the far lower right corner... is that the umbrella miniboss from Kirby?
I feel like I could listen to this tune for a long time without getting bored lol.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on August 26, 2024, 11:34:25 AM• Maybe add a dashed line from m11 LH 1st voice beat 4 to m12 RH 2nd voice beat 1 (G#)? Just to show the progression.
Any thoughts on this?
- m2 RH b1.5 - I'm hearing this G# an octave lower
- m11 RH b4.5 - I'm hearing a G# instead of F# here
- m12 RH - To me it sounds like the top line should be up a whole step (D# instead of C# and E# instead of D#). I also can't make out the G# and A#, I think its all unison on C# and D# with the exception of the flute.