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Title: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Zeta on May 31, 2024, 08:21:33 PM
Submission Information:

Series: EarthBound/Mother
Game: Mother 3
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Mind of a Thief
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/1620) | MIDI (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/1620) | PDF (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/1620)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Latios212 on May 31, 2024, 08:22:12 PM
I meant to submit this a while back and it fell down my priority list. But it's time now, and I made some improvements to the sheet today!

Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: goldenscruff on June 08, 2024, 03:12:32 PM
One quick thing I noticed, m10 is dotted, dotted, quaver and not a triplet
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Latios212 on June 10, 2024, 07:43:32 PM
Ah yes thanks! Updated that~
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Kricketune54 on July 10, 2024, 07:54:15 AM
Sorry it's taken me a bit to get around to this but I don't have much to say. Approved.

• Can update tempo marking font to current NSM template
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Bloop on July 10, 2024, 01:36:18 PM
Definitely looking good! Just a few arrangement related things I noticed:
-Since there's not a snare hit on beat 2 (just the hi-hat), maybe you could leave out the bottom note in the L.H. in that beat from m5 on?
-There are a few places where it'd be hard for the player to hold the R.H. bottom notes (m6, m9 and m18). Maybe you could use another voicing there, or do you want the player to use the pedal for those?
-m31: Just as an alternate suggestion, you could write the guitar part as F-C, A, F-C, instead of full chords, so it's a bit easier to play.
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Latios212 on July 18, 2024, 08:07:23 PM
Thanks for checking!

Quote from: Bloop on July 10, 2024, 01:36:18 PM-Since there's not a snare hit on beat 2 (just the hi-hat), maybe you could leave out the bottom note in the L.H. in that beat from m5 on?
I think I wanted to leave that in so it sounds less empty... it gives the accompaniment a bit more of a driving rhythm.

Quote from: Bloop on July 10, 2024, 01:36:18 PM-There are a few places where it'd be hard for the player to hold the R.H. bottom notes (m6, m9 and m18). Maybe you could use another voicing there, or do you want the player to use the pedal for those?
Oh yeah, pedal for sure since jumping to hit the notes is easy. I've added a pedal direction after the intro

Quote from: Bloop on July 10, 2024, 01:36:18 PM-m31: Just as an alternate suggestion, you could write the guitar part as F-C, A, F-C, instead of full chords, so it's a bit easier to play.
Yes, good idea! Updated~

Files updated :)
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Bloop on July 19, 2024, 02:57:59 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on July 18, 2024, 08:07:23 PMI think I wanted to leave that in so it sounds less empty... it gives the accompaniment a bit more of a driving rhythm.
Ahh I see, that works yeah!

Quote from: Latios212 on July 18, 2024, 08:07:23 PMYes, good idea! Updated~
Is there a specific reason you switched the F-A and C around in beat 4.5? It makes it harder to play than the other way around.
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Radiak488417 on July 19, 2024, 10:36:40 PM
Not much to say here, really nice work! My only suggestion is to tie beat 2.5 to beat 3 in the LH in m7/8/11/12/16, since the kick doesn't hit on beat 3 there.
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Latios212 on July 20, 2024, 09:34:02 PM
Quote from: Bloop on July 19, 2024, 02:57:59 AMIs there a specific reason you switched the F-A and C around in beat 4.5? It makes it harder to play than the other way around.
nope, just a mistake lol

Quote from: Radiak488417 on July 19, 2024, 10:36:40 PMNot much to say here, really nice work! My only suggestion is to tie beat 2.5 to beat 3 in the LH in m7/8/11/12/16, since the kick doesn't hit on beat 3 there.
Thanks! Ah yeah you're right, listening to the bass as well. I assume you meant to include m. 15 as well.

Files updated!
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Bloop on July 21, 2024, 04:31:32 AM
Awesome, I'll accept!
Title: Re: [GBA] Mother 3 - "Mind of a Thief" (Replacement) by Latios212
Post by: Zeta on July 21, 2024, 04:31:35 AM
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot