Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Dream Course
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: The First Hole
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5007)
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This is a re-write of an old sheet of mine, and I felt it deserved special treatment.
- m4/8 LH have an additional G on beat 4.5, on the first line of the staff.
- m20 LH beat 4: Should be Db instead of C# (G7#5b5) - just look at how the voices resolve back to C
- m28 RH: Last note should be E# instead of Fn (goes chromatically up to F#)
- m29 RH has 3 voices throughout, and some of the notes are different than what you have:
(https://i.imgur.com/dHObaUU.png)
Nice sheet
Quote from: Static on May 02, 2022, 05:57:46 PM- m4/8 LH have an additional G on beat 4.5, on the first line of the staff.
- m20 LH beat 4: Should be Db instead of C# (G7#5b5) - just look at how the voices resolve back to C
- m28 RH: Last note should be E# instead of Fn (goes chromatically up to F#)
- m29 RH has 3 voices throughout, and some of the notes are different than what you have:
(https://i.imgur.com/dHObaUU.png)
Nice sheet
Thanks for checking all of this, these are things I should have revised from the original draft before submitting. New files are up.
Nice, I approve
btw you don't need the courtesy F# in m29 anymore
Quote from: Static on May 15, 2022, 03:17:08 PMbtw you don't need the courtesy F# in m29 anymore
Oop, my bad. Fixed now.
Very glad to see more Dream Course representation!
-In m12, the offbeat chords/bass on beat 3 sound like they're held a little longer than the other notes, you could add some tenutos or staccato-tenutos there if you wanted
-It's really faint, but there are some more notes in m21 RH on beat 4:
(https://www.imgur.com/VXxQS32.jpg)
-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
-m29 LH: the 16th pairs on beats 2 and 3 sound like they should be down an octave
Quote from: Radiak488417 on May 15, 2022, 10:41:41 PM-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
Double checked the channels, that sounds right to me. C-D-F#
Quote from: Radiak488417 on May 15, 2022, 10:41:41 PM-Very glad to see more Dream Course representation!
-In m12, the offbeat chords/bass on beat 3 sound like they're held a little longer than the other notes, you could add some tenutos or staccato-tenutos there if you wanted
-It's really faint, but there are some more notes in m21 RH on beat 4:
(https://www.imgur.com/VXxQS32.jpg)
-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
-m29 LH: the 16th pairs on beats 2 and 3 sound like they should be down an octave
- you gonna help me get Iceberg Ocean on the site, or what? ;)
- I'd rather leave them the way they are, as they're about the same length as other instances of that pattern
- so there are! I'll mark them with tiny notes, to leave playing them up to the performer. It'll sure be a quick leap up to the high G-sharp
- I should've checked those chords myself before blindly changing them. Thanks!
- those might've been left like that from when I was first trying to make playability accommodations. Fixed
New files are up. Thanks, Radiak and Static!
Looking swell! I've played this game a little bit and remember this fun piece :)
The only correction to point out is that m. 12/21 beat 2.25 is a low G instead of C. Other than that, the D.S. is high but everything else is good!
Quote from: Latios212 on June 01, 2022, 06:01:10 PM- Looking swell! I've played this game a little bit and remember this fun piece :)
- The only correction to point out is that m. 12/21 beat 2.25 is a low G instead of C.
- Other than that, the D.S. is high but everything else is good!
- I couldn't get into the golf mechanic way back when, but I think it'll soon be time to give this game another chance
- Ah, so it is. Thank you for catching that
- moved the D.S. down a smidge
Files are updated.
Neato, looks good!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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