Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Ending Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ND381 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=6532)
[Reupload due to lack of competence]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qWrG0CuGr5U
Continuing on from here: https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=11399.0 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=11399.0)
We'll work out file conversion later, working off of your PDF for now.
Last piece of feedback for the intro for now:
- m. 14 LH should be G-C-B on beats 2-3-4 instead of A-B-A (watch out for copypasta)
Some feedback for the Littleroot Town section:
- m. 23 LH is a sudden jump from parts around it. Beat 1 should be E. The E on beat 1 and D# on beat 3 should be at the same octave as the bass in the following measure, so that line chromatically descends.
- m. 25 - LH should start out with ascending C-G-C-E instead
- Check your LH in m. 26. Hearing A-E-G-C-E-G ascending, then an A.
- Check the rest of the arpeggios too... hearing some discrepancies in m. 29, 31, and onwards as well.
- Melody is incorrect in m. 26-27
- G doesn't restrike on m. 30 beat 1.5
- Not hearing F# in the chord in m. 35 - write in a C instead?
Bump for arranger. It'd be cool if this one could be fixed up.
Archiving this one for inactivity. Feel free to resubmit with the above fixes (though there are a lot more sections to go :P)