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Title: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on June 06, 2020, 02:13:31 PM
[MUL] Duck Hunt

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Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: LeviR.star on June 06, 2020, 02:17:39 PM
Oh thank goodness! We really needed this one, and I was gonna contact you about replacing it!
Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on June 06, 2020, 02:29:45 PM
I'm glad you remembered, cause I almost forgot I had this xD

Maybe soon I'll submit the rest of the soundtrack too
Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Latios212 on June 14, 2020, 05:10:13 PM
Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on June 06, 2020, 02:29:45 PMMaybe soon I'll submit the rest of the soundtrack too
rip lol at least we have one

I prefer this video... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80)

Anyway, feedback! Pitches look good but those En/Gn on beat 3 should really be Dx (oof) and Fx as they chromatically neighbor the notes of the tonic chord (E# and G#). There's also an inconsistent interval of Dn and E# (Dn should be Cx) in m. 1 beat 2.5.

Actually, I think this sheet would be better written in Db major. Easier key signature and those chords would be the intuitive C major and Db major. You'd get a couple of double flats as the melody chromatically descends, but you could re-spell those as naturals that get flatted again on the next note. (i.e. Ab-Gn-Gb as opposed to Ab-Abb-Gb).

Also, the text is outside the top and bottom margins.
Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on June 17, 2020, 05:41:27 PM
Quote from: Latios212 on June 14, 2020, 05:10:13 PMI prefer this video... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80)
Updated :P

Quote from: Latios212 on June 14, 2020, 05:10:13 PMActually, I think this sheet would be better written in Db major. Easier key signature and those chords would be the intuitive C major and Db major. You'd get a couple of double flats as the melody chromatically descends, but you could re-spell those as naturals that get flatted again on the next note. (i.e. Ab-Gn-Gb as opposed to Ab-Abb-Gb).
Went with the Db spellings and used the natural-flat chromatics. Very good improvements :D

Quote from: Latios212 on June 14, 2020, 05:10:13 PMAlso, the text is outside the top and bottom margins.
Fixeded
Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Latios212 on June 17, 2020, 05:47:54 PM
whee nice
Title: Re: Th3Gavst3r's Replacements
Post by: Static on June 23, 2020, 01:40:51 PM
I don't really have anything else to say here... accepted. Looks great!