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Title: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Zeta on May 25, 2020, 01:23:49 PM
Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Night in the Woods
Console: Multiplatform
Title: MaeBea
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4742)

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Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: BrainyLucario on May 25, 2020, 01:26:43 PM

The pdf might be screwed up as well as the mus since when i transferred it it kinda messed it up.
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Bespinben on May 25, 2020, 09:04:51 PM
The left hand has missing parts. These would be the correct notes (adjusting for overlapping notes and hand reach):

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/401094846107877377/714684105597386833/Screen_Shot_2020-05-25_at_9.39.10_PM.png

The rhythm of the bell line is correct, but it is oddly notated. "Showing beat 3" is a side-effect Two-Level Rhythmic Parsing Rule (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I6mWguApzAU); whole notes and on-beat half notes can cross the middle of the bar. It should be notated like this:

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/714685209597181972/Screen_Shot_2020-05-25_at_9.43.40_PM.png

On the arranging side, the arrangement feels a bit empty. In the OST, the shimmery organ chords in the background help to fill in the gaps between the bass guitars and the bells. You could emulate this by adding harmonies.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/714689736924725278/Screen_Shot_2020-05-25_at_10.01.18_PM.png

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/714689763197714452/Screen_Shot_2020-05-25_at_10.01.35_PM.png
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: BrainyLucario on May 25, 2020, 10:54:35 PM
Notepad issues prevent the changes to measure 5 and stuff but everything else is updated
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Bespinben on May 26, 2020, 01:43:01 AM
Nice! Few fixes:

*Upper bass voice in m.8 beat 4 should be "D" instead of "E"
*Upper bass voice in m.11 beat 4 should be "C" instead of "D"

*M.9-12 could also benefit from harmonization:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/714760247159291904/Screen_Shot_2020-05-26_at_2.40.25_AM.png
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: BrainyLucario on May 26, 2020, 02:42:51 AM
BrainyLucario: Who wants to fix sheets at 3 in the morning?

Bespinben: Oh boy 3 AM!

Fixed
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Bespinben on May 26, 2020, 02:16:22 PM
#3amSquad
~Le approve~

I've updated the files with the non-Notepad-achievable edits, and also optimized the layout.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/714949923229007932/Screen_Shot_2020-05-26_at_3.15.31_PM.png
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Latios212 on May 26, 2020, 03:42:41 PM
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/342163633339629568/714970882136604772/unknown.png?width=409&height=43

Also I'd personally separate layers in 10/12... but definitely fine as is. Once that typo's fixed I'll accept :)
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Bespinben on May 26, 2020, 03:45:00 PM
Typo fixed  ;)
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Latios212 on May 26, 2020, 03:45:47 PM
wheehee
Title: Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario
Post by: Zeta on May 26, 2020, 03:45:53 PM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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