Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Future City
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5007)
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If by any chance you're about to relay feedback from checking my draft in the "Kirby's Epic Yarn Arrangement Project", note that here (at Zeila's suggestion) the last 4 measures have been modified to give the RH an independent part from the LH.
This is really good. Clean, accurate, and simple to play. Happy to see this one :D
Only a couple of comments:
- I think m. 24 would be better written as 4-tuplets instead of 8-tuplets so it's clearer when the notes fall on the beat.
- For m. 53, 55, 56 I would suggest making the first left hand octave a dotted quarter and/or tenuto since that's a different part there.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 02, 2019, 07:55:03 PMOnly a couple of comments:
- I think m. 24 would be better written as 4-tuplets instead of 8-tuplets so it's clearer when the notes fall on the beat.
- For m. 53, 55, 56 I would suggest making the first left hand octave a dotted quarter and/or tenuto since that's a different part there.
- that's a good idea, consider it done
- I didn't hear that before, but I hear it now. Fixed!
Quote from: Latios212 on November 02, 2019, 07:55:03 PMThis is really good. Clean, accurate, and simple to play. Happy to see this one :D
Thank you! I'm really satisfied with how it turned out. :)
Oh yeah, and the files are fixed, and whatnot.
You're welcome! Approved :)
Notes look good, arrangement looks good. All around good.
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot