Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dodo's Coming!!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/407) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/407) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/407)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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How do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".
Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on August 05, 2019, 09:00:09 PMHow do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".
By letting us know and then one of the updaters can change it, which I have now done. Thanks!
Hey, I remember looking over this a long time ago! So, I've looked at it again:
- I really don't have anything to say note-wise, everything checks out. The only thing I would change would be to move the D on beat 3 (3rd 8th note beat) to the LH. I think it feels just a bit more natural to play it like that since the LH is already going up toward that D later in the measure.
- Add Square to the copyright info next to Nintendo.
- m34 RH: Add a slur on the other side of the other side of grace notes leading to the A natural.
- For the last 4 systems, I would distribute the measures 3-3-4-3. I think this provides the most even spacing for the music.
Really great sheet you got here.
Alrighty. The file's have been updated.
Looks great, I approve.
Great sheet, thanks for the replacement! Just a few last comments from me.
- When using clef changes, introduce them at the start of the phrase where notes are in the new clef, and not before rests. This applies to m. 28 and 33-35.
- Page 1 footer and page 2 header are outside the margins.
- Cresc. in m. 28 is extremely close to the notes. We could make more space by flipping the right hand part.
Here's a file with the edits for you to use. (https://www.dropbox.com/s/o6jc3glq0nbqzfl/Super%20Mario%20RPG%20-%20Dodo%27s%20Coming.musx?dl=1)
Thanks for the file. I've updated the submission files.
No problem! All good to go, accepting now.
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot