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Title: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2019, 05:14:43 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Tyrian
Console: PC
Title: Beer
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)

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Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on August 05, 2019, 05:14:57 PM
Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Latios212 on August 05, 2019, 05:55:45 PM
beer! beer! beer! (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=THH7P08zuhU)

Couple of comments on the accompaniment:
- m. 16-17 would probably be better off with A in the offbeat dyads instead of re-striking the F's
- m. 18 should have the same descending bass pattern as other places

Also, move the copyright/URL within the margin. Other than that, looks awesome!
Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on August 05, 2019, 06:20:12 PM
Quote from: Latios212 on August 05, 2019, 05:55:45 PMbeer! beer! beer! (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=THH7P08zuhU)

Couple of comments on the accompaniment:
- m. 16-17 would probably be better off with A in the offbeat dyads instead of re-striking the F's
- m. 18 should have the same descending bass pattern as other places

Also, move the copyright/URL within the margin. Other than that, looks awesome!

Right on all accounts :D
Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Latios212 on August 05, 2019, 06:21:33 PM
Awesome! Good to go :)
Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Libera on August 05, 2019, 06:21:54 PM
I just checked it myself and found exactly the same things, so we're good to go then!
Title: Re: [PC] Tyrian - "Beer" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2019, 06:22:01 PM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot