Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Dimble Wood (Inside Bowser)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
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Nice sheet, here, just a few small things:
- All the grace notes should preferably be 16th note grace notes because there are more than 2, and there should be a slur on them leading to the main note.
- I would put this sheet in cut time personally, leaving all note values the same. The actual feel/pace of the song isn't quite as frantic as q=194.
- There is a quarter note on beat 4 of m20 and 24 (RH). The two flutes are playing an F and D in both of those spots.
Alright! I've updated the files with the edits.
Oops, one more thing I just caught now: The title on the sheet says "Bowser's Inside Stroy". You might want to fix that lol
All the other changes look fantastic.
Quote from: Static on February 01, 2019, 07:56:01 PM"Bowser's Inside Stroy"
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I can't type for my life.
Doesn't help that I can't wear my glasses with my headphones, thanks for pointing that out. (Not that I can't read without them, I probably wouldn't have noticed
with my glasses on, either.)
Files have been updated.
Nice work, just a few comments from me!
- Header and footer information are all outside the set page margins.
- Grace notes in m. 21 should be facing upwards.
Other suggestions: flip the slur in m. 37 upwards to indicate that the phrase ends on the B and not the F# whole note, and perhaps include a Bn in measure 38 since Bb was used in a similar-looking place the measure before.
Here's a file with the above edits you can use! (https://www.dropbox.com/s/g4r0dzs3ax240ts/Dimble%20Wood%20%28Inside%20Bowser%29.musx?dl=1)
Alright, I've updated the files.
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot